Even the third time reading I was still stupidly excited, adn then there's more of it at the end, and you know how long I spent RAVING about the first read, so i know what you're thinking, right? Im gonna fuck up your comments page by musing about Karuoac if he wasnt high, and talking about the interconnectedness of sound and movement in the structure of the phrases.... But im not gonna. its wonderful. Loved "Naked shame. Hands cover. Body turned" because theres such a succinctness about it all, that this humanises it again. PLEASE keep writing! Ive only half forgiven you for abandoning the hold you had on me with the ohter one (though I do understand, really). Dont make me start sending you things again!
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Date: 2009-03-19 12:16 am (UTC)But im not gonna.
its wonderful.
Loved "Naked shame. Hands cover. Body turned"
because theres such a succinctness about it all, that this humanises it again.
PLEASE keep writing! Ive only half forgiven you for abandoning the hold you had on me with the ohter one (though I do understand, really). Dont make me start sending you things again!